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Subject: !!!READ!!! Dreamers blues
Replies: 4 Views: 1565
darkseth 8.02.08 - 06:31am
Dreamers blues, the skies refuse, thru mattered hues, our souls infuse, spirit ensues, wat mind eludes, the self soars, to skies unexplored, pull the ripcord, sail thru air lyka sword, mind freed from thout, to escape discord, sitting on this cloud, dreams profound, i pray o universe, let my soul disperse... Any input wud b appreciated im the new guy Lol hi poets! *
hrdbody 8.02.08 - 07:15pm
im nt dissing . Jst asking . Wats yr poem about? *
darkseth 19.02.08 - 05:13am
I take it ur spiritual buddy? Its about the subconscies being set free from limits and the soul connecting to the universe... Must say i Dnt think this poem is hard to understand. Mayb with more experience u will b abl to read not the poem but inside the poems on soul. *
hrdbody 26.02.08 - 06:36am
Nah i get da sol sorin thing . Wat i meant by my question was wat is it about , love , sadnes , life. Ect. Nevermind tho . I got da pic a secnd glance. Yr poemz on freedom. Wel at least dats how i c it. Would u mind leavin a yr views on my poems. Would sum feed back on them. N da 1st 1 is mis titled. Thanx man. *
calvo 6.08.08 - 08:57am
Many words define this so,wot it feels 2 b on this road.deep inside my hole,i seek thy beauty 2 anchor my soul.lead me down the lane of hope,n tie my soul wit ur splendid rope.giv me thy word n al shower u wit the works of my art.take a glance at the sky,wea our hearts shower the earth.beauty of the word,i ask this once,to quench my thirst *
